Wednesday, 18 March 2015

My Colour Poem!!

Colour  Yellow!!

Yellow is the feel of happiness! 

Yellow is the look of a book from the book store.

Yellow is the smell of a rotten banana.

Yellow is the taste of a banana flavoured fruit brust!!

Yellow is the sound of a baby chicken chirpping.

Yellow is the feel of a bird pecking at you.

Yellow is the look of a toy ball!!

Yellow is the smell of a flower.

Yellow is the taste of a cake yummy!

Yellow is the sound of laughing under the summer sun!

8 comments:

  1. i think it is really good.

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  2. i think it is really good.

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    1. Hi Zoe thank you! i am glad you like it!

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  3. Hi Shakanna i like your poem yellow reminds me of a yellow ice block

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    1. Hi Emma i am glad that you like my poem as well!

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  4. wow cool colour poem I like the colour yellow it is the colour of the sun.

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  5. hi love your peom yellow reminds me the sunshine when it was out

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  6. Alice rm 18 Te Mata4 June 2015 at 11:33

    This is a very clever. It makes me think of the yellow sunshine shining on me. Was there a format you needed to follow when you wrote this?

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